“Green Is”
May 2nd, 2007
atesh.mp3By Atesh
Green is leaves
Blowing through the air
Green is seedlings…
A baby plant that will soon
GROW
Into a flower.
Green is watermelon
That tastes so sweet
And exellent on a summer day.
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Atesh, I love the idea of the sweet summer watermelon- you’re making me hungry!
Very Good Atesh! You are a great poet!
Atesh, your wonderful poem makes me think of spring and the flowers that are beginning to bloom. Keep writing!
Hi Atesh,
Your poem made me think of spring when everything starts turning green again and little seedling start to sprout. Thanks for sharing it on your blog!
Hi Atesh,
I loved your poem. I love watermelon and your poem made me think of summer and eating my favorite fruit. You are quite a poet – I really enjoyed your imagery.
Hello young poet Atesh,
Green is a great color to write a poem about. I love the color green. It is the perfect color for spring and summer. It is also the color of a clean planet and that is good for all of us. Was this a hard poem for you to do? Who or what inspired you to write a poem about the color green?
I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Hi Atesh!
great job on the poem! Green is definatley part of nature!
keep writing!
Ms Guzzo
WI
Atesh,
I really liked your poem. I just ate watermelon this evening. Keep up the great work!
Atesh your poem is sooo great . I love it . I know that you have a wonderful imagination your are very creative. Please keep writting.
Love you,
MOM
Wow Teshy! Now you know how fun words can be. You can create adventures for people using just words and your imagination.
Keep reading so you can learn new words for more cool poetry that everybody is loving!
Atesh you are sooo creative . I love how you expressed your feelings of what the color green means to you.
Keep writting sweety pie, you are a great poet.
Love you,
Mom
thats very good i just like your poem because that is my favorite color
thats very good i like it very much it is idk ”i dont know” how to explain it
Wow! What a great job you did Atesh! You are a wonderful poet!
Atesh,
Beautiful job on your poem! I could feel the excitement of spring and summer while i was reading. Since I love gardening and watching my flowers and plants GROW, I especially liked that part of your poem.
Mrs. Pincus
Atesh,
I love all of the poems you have written! The green poem had my mouth watering for some watermelon. YUM!