“Orange Is”
May 2nd, 2007
By Jashonjashaun.mp3
Orange is a pumpkin
In a field at a little farm in fall.
Orange is a peach
Sweet, slimy, sticky in my mouth.
Orange is juice
Sweet and sour
On a hot summer day.
Orange is a school bus
Listen to the noisy children
Driving on the way to school!
Orange is a cheetah
RUNNING- Fast! Quickly!
Through the jungle
Under the hot, baking sun.
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Jashon, I love your line about the peach. You did such a great job describing it- it makes me want to eat one now!
Hi Jashon, I love your poem! I feel like I want to see & do all the things you described! (well, except for the cheetah!)
Keep up all the hard work!
Hi Jashon,
Your Orange poem was fun to read. I actually could feel the sticky sweet juice of the orange from your wonderful description. Thanks for sharing it on the blog!
Jashon,
Your poem is terrific! I especially love the cheetah part. Did you know I went to South Africia this Feburary and actually had the chance to pet a real cheetah at a preserve.
Jashon,
great poem! Cheetas are cool and I love peaches!
keep up the great writing!
Ms. P.Guzzo
teacher assistant at WI
Jashon,
You poem was great! Orange reminds me of you. Sunny and bright! My favorite part was about the Cheetah. You are a great poet!
Wow! Jashon, Your poem made me crazy happy!
Hi Jashon,
Summer is almost here. Orange does remind me of a peach. I can taste it in my mouth. Juicy, sticky, yummy.
Delicious.
that was so cool were did u get the idea of pumkin
jashon,
Super poem! I love how you described the orange and peach. I could imagine the sweet stickiness! Keep up the great work!
Jashon,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The way you described orange juice makes me want to have a glass right now! I also liked how you used the words “hot” and “baking” to describe the sun. You are a very descriptive writer!
Mrs. Pincus
Great job!!! I absolutely loved it. See you at the bus stop!
Mayte and Jurnee