“Pink Is”
May 2nd, 2007
amanda.mp3By Amanda
Pink is the love that fills the air
When someone is in love.
Pink is lemonade
I drink on a hot day.
Pink is bubble gum that is stuck to my shoe
When I walk I hear it stick to the sidewalk.
Pink is as quiet as a sleeping lamb
Shhhhh….
It is about to wake up!
Pink is a girl’s paradise!
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Amanda, I think it’s very cool that you made “pink” into a sound. I imagine it as a quiet sound too!
Hi Amanda,
Your name and your poem remind me of my daughter, also named Amanda! She is almost 19 years old, but my Amanda still loves to write poetry and she loves to write it with her pink pen!
Your poem was so sweet and beautiful!
From,
Paula Dornburgh (Ms. Cristella’s Aunt!)
Amanda,
Your poem made me feel happy and like a young girl again. I actually felt like wearing all pink after I read it.
Excellent Amanda!
It is so true Pink is a girl’s paradise!!!
Ms. Guzzo
WI
hi amanda its hannah i liked how you said pink is a girls paradise.
Hi amanda its christiana i loved the part where you said
pink is the color that fills the air.I agree
AManda,
I love the color pink. It is my favorite color. You made pink come alive for me. Great job!
Amanda,
Your poem is fantastic. I especially love the lamb and the bubble gum stuck to your shoe. It reminded me of the joys of being a little girl.
Keep up the super poetry writing!
Amanda - you are amazing. What a great poem! You should write tons more! How about the color PEA GREEN!
Amanda,
Your poem was really fantastic! Every stanza described pink well. My favorite parts were when you described pink to “love” and how “pink is a girl’s paradise.” Terrific job!
Mrs. Pincus
Dear Amanda,
You are a Great writer! Poems are not easy to make, but you have a tallent for them I believe. You are an observant , imaginative, descriptive, and artistic person. You are Wonderful and have a lot to offer.
Love,
Cynthia
Dear Amanda,
your poem was so imaginative,raidiant, awesome.I could visualize the part when you said lovethat fills the air your a great poet you should let your feelings come true by being a poet when you grow up.
Amanda,
I liked the part when you said pink’s a girls paridise
Ann