“Red Is”
May 2nd, 2007
hannah.mp3By Hannah
Red is a juicy red jello
That is so soft is s-l-i-t-h-e-r-s
Like a snake down your throat.
Red is blood
That comes out of your body
When you get a painful shot
OW!
Red is Hawaiian punch
That looks like red Gatorade
And gives you a red, fruity mustache.
Red is a sweet, juicy strawberry
That makes my mouth water.
Yum! Yum!
Red is mad
That makes your face look like a
Ripe tomato.
Red is chapped lips
That I get a lot when I lick them
And it stings!
Red is a shiny, bright fire engine
That makes a ear-piercing noise
Flashing through the dark night.
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Hannah, I love the line where you compared a mad face to a ripe tomato! You’re such a great poet!
Hannah, you are an amazing poet…love the way you used so many vivid images…I felt RED!
Hi hannah its christiana I loved the way you used foods it made my mouth water.
Hannah, you have a great way with words and a wonderful imagination! Keep up the amazing work!
Hannah, I can clearly see the color red after reading your exciting poem. Your vivid images make the color come alive in my mind. Keep writing!
Hannah,
Your descriptions are so vivid! I really liked the image of someone’s face turning red with anger…that was a particularly strong image for me. You are very talented!
hannah i love your poem my favorite part was when you tailked about jello like a snake when ever i eat jello i feel the same way
Hi Hannah,
Great poem! I loved how you used “ear-pierceing noise” to descibe fire engines and red!
keep writing!
Ms. Guzzo
WI
Wow I never thought about red having so many different ways to describe it. Great job!!!!!
Christianas’ mom
Hannah,
Hannah,
Awesome poem!! I love jello! I agree the fire engines have ear piercing noise. Your poem is great!!
Hannah,
What a descriptive poem you have written! When I read the part about the jello slithering down your throat, I could actually feel it! Great job!
Mrs. Pincus
My favorite poem…very descriptive, imaginative…it really made red come alive!
Hannah I love the part when you said red is a sweet juicy strawberry that makes my mouth water yum yum.
my favorite part is RED is blood that comes out of your body when you get a painful shot