“White Is”
May 2nd, 2007
james.mp3By James
White is a mealworm
In the ground
A mealworm that squirms all around.
White is a big cloud
Floating in the sky.
White is paper what becomes colorful
When I draw.
White is vanilla ice cream
Creamy and delicious!
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James, the mealworm was a very fun idea! I also love how you made that stanza rhyme!
James,
I love the images you created in your color poem! Great job!
James, I loved the image of a white cloud floating in the sky. It made me think of flying in an airplane and looking down at the clouds. You did a really good job on this poem. Thanks for sharing it.
Hi James ,
I loved how you described the white clouds floating in the sky. I love watching the clouds especially on windy days!
great job!
Ms. Guzzo
teacher assistant at WI
James,
I liked your poem! Mealworms are what Gavin fed to his bearded dragon Yugina. You did a really good job describing the color white. Continue to write great poems!
Hi James – It’s Mrs. Daley
We just heard you read your poem on the Smartboard. My students loved the first stanza about the mealworm. They had a personal connection because we learned about them….remember that! Great job!
From, Mrs. Daley and her first graders
Dear james,
You did a fantastic job on your color poem! I love how you created imagery! Keep up the great work!
James,
You did a wonderful job using descriptive language to describe the color white. I could almost taste the creamy, delicious vanilla ice cream. Yum!
Mrs. Pincus