Going To Georgia
A Memoir by Payge
I went to Georgia last summer and it took two whole days to drive there! “Mom… can I have a juicebox?†I asked during the ride.
At last we were there. “Hey Mom! There’s Brianna’s aunts house!†I said.
I met my cousin named Courtney. She is excited and goofy like me. Courtney has long brown hair. She is eight.
We went in the pool at the hotel. We played in the pool. “Splash!†We were laughing a lot. “Marco!†I said. “Polo!†said Courtney in the big pool. It was awesome playing water tag!
I joked all day and all night till I fell down. Joking is awesome to me every day and every night.
I can’t wait to spend more time there!
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Payge, this is a super memoir! I love how you used dialogue to make your writing “come alive.” When I read it it’s kind of like reading a play!
Ms. Cristella