My Toy Bus

December 9th, 2007

A Memoir By Jimmy

My toy bus is seven years old. That’s as old as me! I wanted to play with it on the way home. I played with it since that day I opened it.

It helps me remember when I was a baby liking cars. I started liking buses. Then I liked trucks and then cars.

I had about fifteen cars. I made traffic jams with cars and trucks and buses and my first bus. It made noises on wood and tile. It sounded like this, “Vvreshhhtsh!”

I whished around with it. I made it get into an accident. It went CRASH! BANG! BOOM! BONG!
I made policemen and firemen come in a rush! Shhh! Shhh! Motorcycles drove through it.

It was a blast playing with toy cars.




  1.   ccristella on December 10, 2007 6:02 pm

    Wow Jimmy! Your writing is spectactular! The sound effects that you added make is so much fun to read. What a great revision!

    Ms. Cristella :)

  2.   Betsy Buzaid on December 12, 2007 12:49 am

    Jimmy that is a terrific story. I had no idea that the first yellow bus we bought you had created so many traffic jams!

    mom

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