My Trip to Milwaukee
December 9th, 2007
A Memoir by Jared
I went to Milwaukee. It took six hours. It was long! The trip was for my birthday.
I went in a jazz club. It was so cool when they sang “Happy Birthday†with their trumpets and their tapshoes!
They had a vanilla cake with sprinkles.
There was also an amusement park we went to. There it had a pool. I did flips. Somebody said, “Incredible dude!†The pool was ten feet.
When we were there my brother gave me a punching bag. It was a super trip!
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This is such a cool special moment Jared, great choice! I love the description about the jazz club. I can hear the sounds in my head. Great details!
Ms. Cristella
I thought this was great!
I can see you sing and dacing.
I hope you had a lot of fun.
Maybe next year we can go somewhere eles.