Marvelous Memoirs!
The students of Ms. Cristella’s Class are officially published authors! These 2nd grade writers have been working hard to draft, revise, edit and publish their personal narratives over the past month. We read mentor texts and enhanced our writing with dialogue, sensory details, and adjectives to create these marvelous memoirs. HAPPY READING!
Filed under Memoirs, Ms.Cristella | Comment (0)My Dad’s House
A Memoir By Malik
My dad and his girlfriend are going to be married. Then when they get married I am going to be a stepbrother and have a step-mom.
My step-mom and dad let me play the game “”Scarface” sometimes. I can play the game, and he lets me play the computer all the time and I play every day.
When Ally has a control and I say “Please give me the control” and she doesn’t give me the control I told her, “Do you want a cake?” and then she gives me the control.
I tricked her and I was so happy. I got to watch TV in the room and by myself.
When it was morning I woke up and I saw my dad playing the game, but when I woke up he let me play.
In the afternoon I was listening to Chris Brown and T-Pain “Kiss Kiss.”
I like playing games. Dad’s house is one of my favorite places.
Filed under Malik, Memoirs | Comment (1)Pumpkin Picking
A Memoir By Marbelin, Terance, Areily and Eric
One Friday in October our friends in our class went to go pumpkin picking.
The bus ride was fun because we got to talk to a friend next to us in the place we were sitting. Some boys were singing in the back and making us laugh. The back was also fun because it was so bumpy!
We finally got there! We had to pick pumpkins that fit in the bucket. Some big pumpkins were heavy!
When we got our pumpkins we had to weigh it and put it in the bag. My pumpkin was 5 pounds!
When we got back to school we had a pumpkin party. We painted the pumpkins, we made it float, ate pumpkin pie, pumpkin seeds, and pumpkin muffins! They were so delicious!
That day was awesome, great, and cool. We were happy and never wanted to leave!
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