The Polar Express
December 22nd, 2007
The Polar Express
Lena’s Version
I heard a sound of a train outside my house! I ran outside to see it. A conductor was there I asked him where the train went. He said it went to the North Pole. He said the train was called The Polar Express.
When we got there I saw lots of elves gathering. Then, I saw Santa Claus. He came over to us and pointed to me! I sat on his lap. He asked me, “What do you want for Christmas?” I thought then I said that I wanted a dress that had the same design. It was a beautiful dress.
I wore it on Christmas morning and it was a great Christmas! THE END.
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Lena, you becoming such a talented author! You used sounds, dialogue and strong details. I love the idea of asking for a beautiful Christmas dress! I would like that too!
-Ms. Cristella