The Polar Express
December 22nd, 2007
The Polar Express
Brianna’s Version
Once upon a time a girl named Brianna was sleeping. She heard a noise outside. Everything was shaking in her bedroom. She went downstairs and saw no presents.
She opened the door and saw a train and a man said, “Are you coming?” “No!” the girl said. And the man said, “You should go.” But she changed her mind and she was running to get on the train.
She went in the train and saw kids. She said, “Where are we going?” One kid said, “We are going to the North Pole.” “What is the name of this train?” “The Polar Express…” THE END.
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Brianna, you are becoming such a strong writer. You used dialogue, sound effects, and details. This turned out to be a very fun story. You should be proud!
Ms. Cristella