The Polar Express

December 22nd, 2007

The Polar Express
Samantha’s Version

I was in my bed when I heard a whistle and saw smoke. I got my slippers on and tiptoed out the door. I saw a man. He said, “All Aboard!” I wasn’t so sure if I should go on. But then I asked where they were going. “We are going to the North Pole,” he said. So I thought. “Hmmm” But then I went on.

I saw lots of kids. They were serving ginger tea with a gingerbread cookie. I saw little things that looked like a little dot. But when we got closer they got bigger. Then we saw Santa!

He was going to pick the first kid to get a present. He picked another kid. I was so mad. But he picked me for the second kid. I felt a little better. Then we went on the train to go home. When it was my stop I went in my bed and had happy dreams all night. THE END.


One Response to “The Polar Express”

  1. ccristella on December 22, 2007 8:38 pm

    Super story! You did a great job borrowing the author’s ideas and making them your own creative thoughts. You are becoming such a talented writer!

    -Ms. Cristella :)

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