The Polar Express
December 22nd, 2007
The Polar Express
Elina’s Version
I was sleeping and I heard a train. “TOOT!” I got out of bed and went to the door. I walked out and the conductor asked, “Do you want to go on the train?” I said yes.
I got on the train and I went over the hills and in the woods and I arrived at the North Pole! I saw Santa Claus. I asked if I could go with him on his sleigh. He gave me the bell that fell off his sleigh.
I got back on the train and the train took me home. The bell was in my pocket. I asked my mom if she believes in Santa. She said yes. “Then you can hear the bell!” I said. THE END.
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Elina,
You did a great job borrowing some of the author’s ideas and making them your own. I love the ending of your story. You are turning into such a wonderful author!
Ms. Cristella