Comments for Ms.Cristella's Class Blog http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella Just another TUFSDblogs.org weblog Mon, 19 May 2008 22:52:40 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 Comment on My Winter by Mom http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/01/13/my-winter/comment-page-1/#comment-453 Mom Mon, 19 May 2008 22:52:40 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/01/13/my-winter/#comment-453 I love your winter poem. It reminds me of our house and being toasty in the wintertime. I love your winter poem. It reminds me of our house and being toasty in the wintertime.

]]> Comment on Kittens by Graybeard http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/04/19/kittens/comment-page-1/#comment-452 Graybeard Wed, 07 May 2008 19:52:06 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/04/19/kittens/#comment-452 Meow!!! Great poem Elina! Graybeard Meow!!! Great poem Elina!

Graybeard

]]> Comment on Kickball by mommy http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/04/19/kickball/comment-page-1/#comment-451 mommy Mon, 28 Apr 2008 15:18:44 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/04/19/kickball/#comment-451 Sounds like you had a lot of fun. Really nice poem. Sounds like you had a lot of fun. Really nice poem.

]]> Comment on Stapler: A Personification Poem by Anwer Hossain http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/stapler-a-personification-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-449 Anwer Hossain Thu, 17 Apr 2008 02:02:10 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/stapler-a-personification-poem/#comment-449 Hi,My name is Anwer Hossain. This a nice poem i ever seeing about personification poem. This a great , and i can just tell i love this poem....... Dear, You Thank You........... Hi,My name is Anwer Hossain. This a nice poem i ever seeing about personification poem. This a great , and i can just tell i love this poem…….

Dear,
You

Thank You………..

]]> Comment on Lawn Mower: A Personification Poem by Kay Hartman http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/lawn-mower-a-personification-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-448 Kay Hartman Sat, 05 Apr 2008 03:35:45 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/lawn-mower-a-personification-poem/#comment-448 Wow....it's a nice poem!!Keep up the good work!!Good luck!! Wow….it’s a nice poem!!Keep up the good work!!Good luck!!

]]> Comment on Pencil Sharpener: A Personification Poem by h http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/pencil-sharpener-a-personification-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-447 h Thu, 13 Mar 2008 18:48:47 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/pencil-sharpener-a-personification-poem/#comment-447 That was GREAT!!! That was GREAT!!!

]]> Comment on Lawn Mower: A Personification Poem by Sara http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/lawn-mower-a-personification-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-446 Sara Thu, 13 Mar 2008 18:34:38 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/lawn-mower-a-personification-poem/#comment-446 Hey, This is a good poem.Good Job!!!! Hey,
This is a good poem.Good Job!!!!

]]> Comment on Lawn Mower: A Personification Poem by Sara http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/lawn-mower-a-personification-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-445 Sara Thu, 13 Mar 2008 18:30:00 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/lawn-mower-a-personification-poem/#comment-445 Love this poem! Its the best I've ever heard. Keep going forth girls! Love this poem! Its the best I’ve ever heard. Keep going forth girls!

]]> Comment on A Fun Snow Day by mommy http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/01/13/a-fun-snow-day/comment-page-1/#comment-441 mommy Tue, 22 Jan 2008 16:24:41 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2008/01/13/a-fun-snow-day/#comment-441 This was very cretive and a lot of fun to read. I can't wait till your next story or poem. You make me so proud. This was very cretive and a lot of fun to read. I can’t wait till your next story or poem. You make me so proud.

]]> Comment on Welcome! by Aliki http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/11/23/welcome/comment-page-1/#comment-440 Aliki Mon, 21 Jan 2008 10:25:17 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/11/23/welcome/#comment-440 Dear Ms Cristella, I didn't know about your blog until Alexa sent it to me yesterday. What wonderful things you have been doing, writing poems and stories, creating color and surprises in words. I have learned so much. I've read lots of the writings of your brilliant authors and poets, and I'll be back to read more. They are lucky to have you, and by the looks of it, they know it and love you! I wish I was in your class! Happy writing and reading, Willa's "Yiayia", Aliki Dear Ms Cristella,

I didn’t know about your blog until Alexa sent it to me yesterday. What wonderful things you have been doing, writing poems and stories, creating color and surprises in words. I have learned so much. I’ve read lots of the writings of your brilliant authors and poets, and I’ll be back to read more. They are lucky to have you, and by the looks of it, they know it and love you! I wish I was in your class!

Happy writing and reading,

Willa’s “Yiayia”,
Aliki

]]> Comment on When My Baby Brother Lucas Was Born by Aliki http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/09/when-my-baby-brother-lucas-was-born/comment-page-1/#comment-439 Aliki Mon, 21 Jan 2008 09:56:24 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/09/when-my-baby-brother-lucas-was-born/#comment-439 Dear Willa, I loved reading your wonderful memoir. I was very touched when I first saw it as a book with your fun illustrations on Christmas morning. That was the best ever Christmas present. Your memories of the day Lucas was born made me laugh and cry at the same time. Reading it now as a story without pictures is just as touching and funny. How lovely that you chose this memory. You are a wonderful writer. Keep doing it! Love, Yiayia Dear Willa,

I loved reading your wonderful memoir. I was very touched when I first saw it as a book with your fun illustrations on Christmas morning. That was the best ever Christmas present. Your memories of the day Lucas was born made me laugh and cry at the same time. Reading it now as a story without pictures is just as touching and funny. How lovely that you chose this memory. You are a wonderful writer. Keep doing it!

Love, Yiayia

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by Aliki http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/comment-page-1/#comment-438 Aliki Sun, 20 Jan 2008 22:28:42 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/#comment-438 Dear Willa, What a wonderful recreation of The Polar Express you've written. I love your original ideas and the the color and movement of your words: how you "dashed up" and "hopped on". I could see your shawl flying in the wind. You made it an exciting story. No wonder Santa gave you that silver bell. Bravo. Love, Yiayia Dear Willa,

What a wonderful recreation of The Polar Express you’ve written. I love your original ideas and the the color and movement of your words: how you “dashed up” and “hopped on”. I could see your shawl flying in the wind. You made it an exciting story. No wonder Santa gave you that silver bell. Bravo.

Love, Yiayia

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by Kathleen Odefey http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/comment-page-1/#comment-434 Kathleen Odefey Mon, 14 Jan 2008 02:37:05 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/#comment-434 Dear Willa, You do a wonderful job of recalling and retelling a story adding your own unique details. I remember taking turns with you doing this at Christmas time. You immediately grabbed the reader's attention with your introduction (or lead) and held it all the way through with your colorful words. You are becoming a wonderful author. Love, Nana Dear Willa,
You do a wonderful job of recalling and retelling a story adding your own unique details. I remember taking turns with you doing this at Christmas time. You immediately grabbed the reader’s attention with your introduction (or lead) and held it all the way through with your colorful words. You are becoming a wonderful author.
Love,
Nana

]]> Comment on Music: an Onomatopoeia Poem by D Reynolds http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/music-an-onomatopoeia-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-432 D Reynolds Thu, 10 Jan 2008 16:26:31 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/05/12/music-an-onomatopoeia-poem/#comment-432 Just to say thank you for showing your class' poems. I have read them with my class and we have enjoyed them very much. It has helped me to teach them about onomatopoeia in poems. Thank you very much Diane Reynolds Just to say thank you for showing your class’ poems. I have read them with my class and we have enjoyed them very much. It has helped me to teach them about onomatopoeia in poems.
Thank you very much
Diane Reynolds

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by Alexa (Willa's Mom) http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-7/comment-page-1/#comment-430 Alexa (Willa's Mom) Wed, 02 Jan 2008 19:52:30 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-7/#comment-430 Hi Will, I loved the story. Non-stop, hair-raising action. You kept me on the edge of my seat. I like the fact that you wanted Santa's suit, instead of the bell, and that you follwed through to the next morning. Also, that you personalized the story by adding "Keep Track of Things". Good job! Willa's mom Hi Will,

I loved the story. Non-stop, hair-raising action. You kept me on the edge of my seat. I like the fact that you wanted Santa’s suit, instead of the bell, and that you follwed through to the next morning. Also, that you personalized the story by adding “Keep Track of Things”. Good job!

Willa’s mom

]]> Comment on When My Baby Brother Lucas Was Born by Mama http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/09/when-my-baby-brother-lucas-was-born/comment-page-1/#comment-427 Mama Wed, 02 Jan 2008 18:55:32 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/09/when-my-baby-brother-lucas-was-born/#comment-427 Dear Willa, How great that you chose this for your memoir. You wrote so many great details. You made me laugh. And I learnt some things that I never knew. Thank you for writing this story. love, Mama Dear Willa,

How great that you chose this for your memoir. You wrote so many great details. You made me laugh. And I learnt some things that I never knew. Thank you for writing this story. love, Mama

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by Mama http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/comment-page-1/#comment-426 Mama Wed, 02 Jan 2008 18:46:50 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/#comment-426 Dear Willa, This is so beautiful! I especially like "I couldn't resist" and the image of you in your shawl and slippers. Keep on writing. I love you. Mommy Dear Willa,

This is so beautiful! I especially like “I couldn’t resist” and the image of you in your shawl and slippers. Keep on writing. I love you. Mommy

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by ccristella http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-2/comment-page-1/#comment-425 ccristella Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:44:23 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-2/#comment-425 Super story Leslie! You did a great job borrowing some of the author's ideas and turning them into your own. This is a fun version of the Polar Express. -Ms. Cristella :) Super story Leslie! You did a great job borrowing some of the author’s ideas and turning them into your own. This is a fun version of the Polar Express.

-Ms. Cristella :)

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by ccristella http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/comment-page-1/#comment-424 ccristella Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:43:32 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-3/#comment-424 Wow Willa, this is such a fun version of the Polar Express! You did a fantastic job borrowing some of the authors ideas and turning them into your own creative details. I love the beginning and the idea of making this all a wonderful dream! You are becoming such a talented author. You should be very proud of yourself! -Ms. Cristella :) Wow Willa, this is such a fun version of the Polar Express! You did a fantastic job borrowing some of the authors ideas and turning them into your own creative details. I love the beginning and the idea of making this all a wonderful dream! You are becoming such a talented author. You should be very proud of yourself!

-Ms. Cristella :)

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by ccristella http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-4/comment-page-1/#comment-423 ccristella Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:41:25 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-4/#comment-423 Lena, you becoming such a talented author! You used sounds, dialogue and strong details. I love the idea of asking for a beautiful Christmas dress! I would like that too! -Ms. Cristella :) Lena, you becoming such a talented author! You used sounds, dialogue and strong details. I love the idea of asking for a beautiful Christmas dress! I would like that too!

-Ms. Cristella :)

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by ccristella http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-5/comment-page-1/#comment-422 ccristella Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:40:02 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-5/#comment-422 Brianna, you are becoming such a strong writer. You used dialogue, sound effects, and details. This turned out to be a very fun story. You should be proud! Ms. Cristella :) Brianna, you are becoming such a strong writer. You used dialogue, sound effects, and details. This turned out to be a very fun story. You should be proud!

Ms. Cristella :)

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by ccristella http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-6/comment-page-1/#comment-421 ccristella Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:38:51 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-6/#comment-421 Super story! You did a great job borrowing the author's ideas and making them your own creative thoughts. You are becoming such a talented writer! -Ms. Cristella :) Super story! You did a great job borrowing the author’s ideas and making them your own creative thoughts. You are becoming such a talented writer!

-Ms. Cristella :)

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by ccristella http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-7/comment-page-1/#comment-420 ccristella Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:37:53 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-7/#comment-420 Will, Your story was so creative and fun to read. I felt SCARED (when the kid fell off the train), SAD(when you lost the suit), and HAPPY- you even made me laugh out loud when I read the note from Santa "Keep track of things!" You are turning into such a wonderful author! You should be very proud. -Ms. Cristella :) Will,

Your story was so creative and fun to read. I felt SCARED (when the kid fell off the train), SAD(when you lost the suit), and HAPPY- you even made me laugh out loud when I read the note from Santa “Keep track of things!”
You are turning into such a wonderful author! You should be very proud.

-Ms. Cristella :)

]]> Comment on The Polar Express by ccristella http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-8/comment-page-1/#comment-419 ccristella Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:35:41 +0000 http://tufsdblogs.org/ccristella/2007/12/22/the-polar-express-8/#comment-419 Elina, You did a great job borrowing some of the author's ideas and making them your own. I love the ending of your story. You are turning into such a wonderful author! Ms. Cristella :) Elina,

You did a great job borrowing some of the author’s ideas and making them your own. I love the ending of your story. You are turning into such a wonderful author!

Ms. Cristella :)

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