Alaina’s In The Mirror Poem

Posted on May 8, 2007 by cgroven.
Categories: Uncategorized.

 alaina.mp3

In the mirror…

 I see my eyebrows like two brown caterpillars.

 I see teeth like white flowers in a garden.

 I see hair like chocolate syrup.

 I see nails like ten shiny beetles.

 I feel happy like a rabbit hopping in the grass

 In the mirror.

 

  By Alaina

12 comments.



  Kay
Comment on May 17th, 2007.

As an 8th grade student, i can honestly say that this is a well-written poem. i love how the student uses nature to describe her features…. =]

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  Ms. Cristella's class
Comment on May 18th, 2007.

Hi Alaina,
This is Ms. Cristella’s second grade class. We read your poem and we especially like the line about your hair being compared to chocolate syrup. We imagine you having long, droopy brown hair.
Maybe we’ll meet you next year!

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  Joe
Comment on May 21st, 2007.

Nice poem i think i see the same

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  Nathanael
Comment on May 21st, 2007.

i am impresed on how u did the compared two things good job

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  emily
Comment on May 23rd, 2007.

i love the part when you feel like a rabbit hopping on the grass

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  Aliki
Comment on May 28th, 2007.

Hi, Ailina
I loved your poem! I am glad you are as happy as a rabbit hopping in grass!

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  Alaina Thaler
Comment on June 3rd, 2007.

Hi Alex
I loved your poem! Very much!

love your friend
Alaina

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  Paula
Comment on June 3rd, 2007.

Alaina,
I am so proud of you. Great poem. I love that you compared your hair to chocolate syrup. Can I have some?
LOVE YOUR MOM – Paula

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  william loffredo
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

Hi Alaina, I especially liked the part where you said your eyes are like caterpillars. I loved your poem so much.

Your friend, Will

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  leahscarpati
Comment on June 11th, 2007.

hi alaina your poem was great from, leah

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  herschel
Comment on June 19th, 2007.

hi alaina,
nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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