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As an 8th grade student, i can honestly say that this is a well-written poem. i love how the student uses nature to describe her features…. =]
Hi Alaina,
This is Ms. Cristella’s second grade class. We read your poem and we especially like the line about your hair being compared to chocolate syrup. We imagine you having long, droopy brown hair.
Maybe we’ll meet you next year!
Nice poem i think i see the same
i am impresed on how u did the compared two things good job
i love the part when you feel like a rabbit hopping on the grass
Hi, Ailina
I loved your poem! I am glad you are as happy as a rabbit hopping in grass!
Hi Alex
I loved your poem! Very much!
love your friend
Alaina
Alaina,
I am so proud of you. Great poem. I love that you compared your hair to chocolate syrup. Can I have some?
LOVE YOUR MOM – Paula
Hi Alaina, I especially liked the part where you said your eyes are like caterpillars. I loved your poem so much.
Your friend, Will
hi alaina your poem was great from, leah
hi alaina,
nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!