Ella’s In the Mirror Poem

Posted on May 8, 2007 by cgroven.
Categories: Uncategorized.

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In the mirror…

I see two eyes like green speckled eggs.

I see hair like braided straw.

I see lips like juicy strawberries.

I see my cheeks like rose petals.

I feel happy when I see me altogether.

In the mirror.

 

By Ella

5 comments.



  Aliki
Comment on May 28th, 2007.

Hi, Ella,
You wrote a delightful poem. Your similes all made up a lovely picture of yourself, and you read it beautifully too. Great!

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  rebecca
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Hi Ella,

Your poem is beautiful. I love when you see your eyes like speckled eggs. And your cheeks do look as soft as rose petals! You are a good writer!!
Love,
Rebecca (Leah’s Mom)

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  leahscarpati
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Hi Ella, I really liked when you compered your lips like juice strawberries your poem was awsome. P.S. i had 2 use my moms E-mail From, Leah

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  Alaina
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

Hello Ella your poem was great! I really liked the part when you see your checks as red petles. Also your checks are red petles

love your friend
Alaina

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  william
Comment on June 8th, 2007.

Hi, Ella your poem is GREAT!!! I especially liked the part when you read your eyes were like green egg!!!!! your friend, william

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