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Hi, Hershel,
What a wonderful imagination you have! Your poem is great!
Herschel,
I am so proud of you. What a great poem!!!! I especially like the liquorish part.
Love,
Mom
Dear Hirsh,
I love the part about the water slide- it’s just like the big water slide at Nana and Pop Pop’s house in Florida.
Love,
Harrison
Hi Herschel,
Love your poem! Your hair is as dark as the night time! You have a good imagination!!!
Love,
Rebecca (Leah’s Mom)
Hi Herschel,
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem! The image of the water slide reminds me of your fun personality and the sprinkles and liquorish remind me of what a sweet person you are! Keep writing and sharing your creative words.
Love,
Ninang
I really liked your poem very much i really liked the part when you feeled your head and you feeled a hard brick did you?
Hi,Herschel great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your buddy william
sweet poem herschel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi herschel nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fantastic poem hersch! from leah