Herschel’s In The Mirror Poem

Posted on May 8, 2007 by cgroven.
Categories: Uncategorized.

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In the mirror…

I see my hair like the dark night time.

I see a nose like a big water slide at a water park.

I see my teeth like little white sprinkles on ice cream.

I see lips like little pieces of liquorish.

I feel my head like a hard brick wall.

In the mirror.

By Herschel

11 comments.



  Aliki
Comment on May 28th, 2007.

Hi, Hershel,
What a wonderful imagination you have! Your poem is great!

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  JOANNE -MOM
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Herschel,
I am so proud of you. What a great poem!!!! I especially like the liquorish part.
Love,
Mom

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  Little Bro- Harrison
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Dear Hirsh,
I love the part about the water slide- it’s just like the big water slide at Nana and Pop Pop’s house in Florida.
Love,
Harrison

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  rebecca
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Hi Herschel,

Love your poem! Your hair is as dark as the night time! You have a good imagination!!!
Love,
Rebecca (Leah’s Mom)

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  Angela
Comment on June 2nd, 2007.

Hi Herschel,
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem! The image of the water slide reminds me of your fun personality and the sprinkles and liquorish remind me of what a sweet person you are! Keep writing and sharing your creative words.
Love,
Ninang

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  alaina
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

I really liked your poem very much i really liked the part when you feeled your head and you feeled a hard brick did you?

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  william
Comment on June 8th, 2007.

Hi,Herschel great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your buddy william

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  leahscarpati
Comment on June 11th, 2007.

sweet poem herschel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  herschel
Comment on June 19th, 2007.

hi herschel nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  leah
Comment on September 23rd, 2007.

fantastic poem hersch! from leah

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