Leah’s In The Mirror Poem

Posted on May 8, 2007 by cgroven.
Categories: Uncategorized.

 leah.mp3

In the mirror…

 I see my ears like alien space ships from very hot Mars.

 I see my teeth like fluffy marshmallows in a big bag.

 I see my eyes like big holes in a big brown hard rock.

 I see my hair like a big huge rollercoaster going down a gigantic hill.

 I feel not so bad.

 In the mirror.

 

By Leah

12 comments.



  jcalvert
Comment on May 17th, 2007.

Hi Leah,

I loved your comparison of teeth to marshmallows!

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  Isabella
Comment on May 17th, 2007.

Leah, you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love your poem.

Your friend,
Isabella

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  Rebecca
Comment on May 18th, 2007.

leah I no that you like marshmellows but you can not munch on your teeth your mom Rebecca

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  Aliki
Comment on May 28th, 2007.

Hi, Leah,
You are a poet with a busy imagination! Congratulations on great similes.

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  rEBECCA
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Leah,
Your poem is beautiful, just like you. I love the line about your eyes like big holes in a big brown rock. Your eyes, like your words show a depth of feeling. I am proud of you and look forward to reading more of your poems!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoMom

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  william
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

Hi Leah I liked the part when you read that your ears were like aliens .Your poem was great!!! from, william

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  ALAINA
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

ha leah love the poem you ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE
ALAINA

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  will
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

Hi Leah, I especially liked the part when you said your ears were aliens from very hot mars. Your poem is great!!!

Your friend, Will

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  leahscarpati
Comment on June 11th, 2007.

nice poem

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  WILIAM
Comment on June 12th, 2007.

Hi Leah, your poem is GRREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE, WILLIAM LOFFREDO

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  rebecca scarpati
Comment on July 14th, 2007.

hi, leah your poem was FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you put so much detail in it! From rebecca

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