Matteo’s In The Mirror Poem

Posted on May 8, 2007 by cgroven.
Categories: Uncategorized.

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In the mirror…

I see my eyes balls like chocolate gumballs.

I see my tongue like a wet draw bridge.

I see my hair like brown spiky grass.

I see my teeth like white hard rocks.

I feel happy when I see myself.

In the mirror.

By Matteo

5 comments.



  Aliki
Comment on May 28th, 2007.

Hello, Matteo,
Congratulations on your wonderful poem and the way you read it. Every simile you picked was descriptive and imaginative. Especially the wet drawbridge. Bravo!

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  leahscarpati
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Hi Matteo your a GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! writer you just amazed me with your poem I SEE MY TONGUE LIKE A WET DRAW BIDGE was GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. From

Leah

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  rebecca
Comment on June 4th, 2007.

Hi Matteo,
What an imaginitve poem! I loved the tongue like a wet draw bridge and your teeth like white hard rocks!
Love,
Rebecca

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  alaina
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

matto you really rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  Will
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

Hi Mateo,

That was good detail when you put hard white rocks on your poem. I liked your poem!!!

From your friend, Will

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