Will’s In The Mirror Poem

Posted on May 8, 2007 by cgroven.
Categories: Uncategorized.

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In the mirror…

I see my eyes like two chocolate balls.

I see my eyebrows like waterfalls of vanilla ice cream.

I see my ears like large tight caves.

I see my hair like brown slippery gummy worms.

I feel happy when I look at my face.

In the mirror.

By Will

19 comments.



  Beth Loffredo
Comment on May 16th, 2007.

Will- I enjoyed hearing your poem!! DOes your hair still look like gummy worms??
I love you- Mom

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  Aliki
Comment on May 28th, 2007.

Hi, Will,
I enjoyed your poem. Good job!

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  rebeccascarpati
Comment on June 1st, 2007.

Hi Will,
I feel happy when I look at your face too! Because you’re always smiling!! I loved your poem, you are a creative writer.

Love,
Rebecca (Leah’s Mom)

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  alaina
Comment on June 5th, 2007.

like your poem

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  Tom Kelly
Comment on June 6th, 2007.

Very nice work Will. I like your the way you read it too. Good Job I love you!
Love, Uncle Tom

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  Bob Loffredo
Comment on June 6th, 2007.

Will,
Grandpa is very proud of you.
Did you know that my fater loved to write poems and I would like to share them with you.
Keep up your poetry.
Love Grandpa Bob

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  cassidy
Comment on June 6th, 2007.

will,
i loved listening to your amazing poem! thanks for the birthday card.. i love you too!

your cousin,
cassidy kelly

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  Love, Nonna
Comment on June 7th, 2007.

Will, thank you for sharing your poem with me. I loved hearing you recite it and smiled when you said that your hair is like gummy worms. Good luck with your poerty.

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  Stephen Loffredo
Comment on June 7th, 2007.

Will, this poem is one of the many great things you have done this year. I am very proud of you.

Love, Dad

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  aunt meg
Comment on June 9th, 2007.

Will- you are awesome and so is your poem. after reading your poem i am now in the mood for some candy. i love you and your gummy hair! aunt meg

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  Erin Mullaghy
Comment on June 9th, 2007.

Hi Will!
We enjoyed your poem!! Rosemary and Seamus smiled and we listened to it five times in a row. They were very impressed!! They also wondered if you would keep your hair when you get it cut=) Yummy!
Love you- Aunt Erin

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  leahscarpati
Comment on June 11th, 2007.

your poem was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  Alex Loffredo
Comment on June 12th, 2007.

Great poem, Will!
Keep up with poetry.
It’s an interesting subject to study.
From Your Cousin,
Alex

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  Celeste Loffredo
Comment on June 12th, 2007.

Will you made a great poem. You write better poems than me.
Your cousin,
Celeste

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  Alex Loffredo
Comment on June 12th, 2007.

You wrote a great poem.
Keep up writing poems!
Poetry is an interesting subject to study.
From You’re Cousin,
Alex

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  Celeste Loffredo
Comment on June 12th, 2007.

Will, you made a great poem. You write better poems than me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your cousin,
Celeste

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  Leo Loffredo
Comment on June 12th, 2007.

Hi Will,
I hope you have a great time wherever you go. I really like your poem.
Love, Leo

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  Uncle Doug
Comment on June 13th, 2007.

Great job Will! I am always happy to learn about your school projects, especially when they are posted on the internet! Very cool! See you Saturday, Uncle Doug

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