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6 Responses to “Computer - Jack”

1. Richard Says:
   April 27th, 2007 at 6:58 pm

   I love my mac too Jack-happy

2. mshipley1 Says:
   April 30th, 2007 at 9:43 am

   Bender, I have a dell it is sooooooooo slow great poem.

3. Peggy Says:
   April 30th, 2007 at 9:43 pm

   An Apple every day,
   Keeps the viruses away!

4. Mr. Krouskoff Says:
   May 2nd, 2007 at 11:20 am

   Hi Jack,
   I enjoyed the contrast in your poem. Using a larger type face for the first and last word worked well for me. I can’t help but wonder if it would be even more powerful if you made up a few similes (comparision that uses “like” or “as”) to create a true picture. I’m sure you wouldn’t write “slow as a turtle” because that’s so common, but I bet you could come up with a few good ones to “pepper” your poem!

5. Student of WI Says:
   May 8th, 2007 at 6:59 pm

   So true. MACs ROCK!

6. Grandma Ann Says:
   May 14th, 2007 at 7:07 am

   Great! My Dell should be in the hospital. Sooo slow and seems to need a doctor and a long vacation. Next time I try a Mac!

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