Ocean- Peter
Ocean
Cool, Wet
Swimming, Playing, Surfing
Coral, Seaweed, Clouds, Sun
Flying, Gliding, Singing
Beautiful, Awesome
Sky
Ocean
Cool, Wet
Swimming, Playing, Surfing
Coral, Seaweed, Clouds, Sun
Flying, Gliding, Singing
Beautiful, Awesome
Sky
April 30th, 2007 at 12:43 pm
Your poem makes me want to go for a dip in the ocean!! I like the descriptive writing!
April 30th, 2007 at 10:32 pm
Your poem conjures up a beautiful visual imagery - GREAT job of transitioning from ocean to sky!!