Water-Brad
Water
Wet, Clear
Swimming, Boating, Fishing
Tides , Fish , Flames , Ashes
Burning, Melting, Smoldering
Orange, Hot
Fire
Water
Wet, Clear
Swimming, Boating, Fishing
Tides , Fish , Flames , Ashes
Burning, Melting, Smoldering
Orange, Hot
Fire
April 30th, 2007 at 9:50 am
Bradley,
I like how you compared fire to Water. I also liked how you discribed both of them. Great Job!!!
April 30th, 2007 at 9:53 am
Dear Me,
That was such a good poem, I love You!
From, Brad
April 30th, 2007 at 12:23 pm
Loved your Poem
great job on it!
-Leave a comment on mine
-Megan
April 30th, 2007 at 12:27 pm
Nice Poem. You Did A Good Job
ALLEGRA=)
May 9th, 2007 at 6:05 pm
Yo! Awesome job on the cool poem! Water and Fire…two great things to compare! Nice job keep writing more poems! Can’t wait to see your next one! Bye!
May 9th, 2007 at 7:23 pm
BRAD!!!!! I love you and you’re amazing. YOUR POEM IS AWESOME!!! Water and fire, nice.
Love always,
MEEEE =] ((your sister))
May 10th, 2007 at 5:38 pm
Awesome dude!!!!!
May 10th, 2007 at 5:39 pm
Spectacular poem….love MOM
May 21st, 2007 at 11:38 am
I like your poem it is really good
~~lizzy~~