War -Benjamin
gory and unnecessary
killing, patrolling and machine-gun rattle
frightening, freaked out, sad and incomprehensible
War
gory and unnecessary
killing, patrolling and machine-gun rattle
frightening, freaked out, sad and incomprehensible
War
April 30th, 2007 at 9:32 pm
Benjamin - You’ve done a terrific job of summing up the unfortunate, horrors of war.
May 2nd, 2007 at 11:16 am
Benjamin,
The images you create with these words are quite powerful. You bring the poem to a powerful end by using the one syllable word that ties it all together.
May 3rd, 2007 at 7:59 am
YOU ROCK!!!!!!!
from, Ryan
May 14th, 2007 at 11:31 am
Wow, Benjamin. that was absolutely one of the most powerful poems i have ever read. the words that you write are like paintbrushes on paper. they creatre a picture of what war is. i think that you should definately continue to write such powerful poems! and if you ever read this, could you please tell Ms. Shipley that i said hi, thanx!
May 18th, 2007 at 12:26 pm
This poem scares me!
Swiltra
May 30th, 2007 at 9:45 am
poli poli ora ben esi ena poli ora arotsi:(translate)nice job ben u are a good poem from peter
May 30th, 2007 at 9:48 am
poli poli ora ben ena ora arosti lein poli ora (translation) nice job ben u are a very good poet from homie g pete
June 23rd, 2007 at 10:16 pm
summing up all there is to sum! great description! (i liked the dramatic font, too!
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