Blind Poetry-Cris A.
The sky is green
The grass is blue
just like me
and just like you.
The ocean is brown
tree trunks are blue
and a cow goes meow
like a cat goes moo.
The moon is bright yellow
the sun is bright white
I wish I could see it
I hear it’s a beautiful sight
After you read this you may think I’m dumb
I’m not dumb I am kind
But I should have told you one thing
I am blind.
May 21st, 2007 at 8:50 pm
Cris- You have really wrote a thoughtful and intriguing poem! I like that you took on the persona of another person and wrote through their eyes, that is the work of a great writer! Keep up the great work!- Ms. Shipley
May 23rd, 2007 at 9:29 pm
Nice poem!!!!!!!!!! It was very deep.
May 24th, 2007 at 10:02 am
I like the colors:)
May 30th, 2007 at 10:03 am
Hey Cris!
Awesome poem. That makes a lot of sense.
It was a little bit funny