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Blind Poetry-Cris A.

May 22nd, 2007 · 4 Comments
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The sky is green
The grass is blue
just like me
and just like you.
The ocean is brown
tree trunks are blue
and a cow goes meow
like a cat goes moo.
The moon is bright yellow
the sun is bright white
I wish I could see it
I hear it’s a beautiful sight
After you read this you may think I’m dumb
I’m not dumb I am kind
But I should have told you one thing
I am blind.



4 responses so far ↓

  • 1    mshipley // May 21, 2007 at 8:50 pm

    Cris- You have really wrote a thoughtful and intriguing poem! I like that you took on the persona of another person and wrote through their eyes, that is the work of a great writer! Keep up the great work!- Ms. Shipley

  • 2    Steph // May 23, 2007 at 9:29 pm

    Nice poem!!!!!!!!!! It was very deep.

  • 3    mshipley1 // May 24, 2007 at 10:02 am

    I like the colors:)

  • 4    Dorian // May 30, 2007 at 10:03 am

    Hey Cris!
    Awesome poem. That makes a lot of sense.
    It was a little bit funny :)

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